**Midnight. Suzume's Room.**
The pale moonlight poured through the window, painting silver streaks across Suzume's bedroom. She laid on her bed, hugging a pillow, a soft smile on her face as she stared at her phone.
**Suzume** (giggling softly):
"Alright... here goes nothing..."
She pressed Daiki's number, her heart fluttering. The phone rang. Once. Twice. Again. No answer.
**Suzume** (smiling nervously):
"Maybe he's watching anime again and forgot his phone on silent..."
She tried again. No answer.
Her smile slowly faded. The glow of the phone screen lit up her worried face.
**Suzume** (whispering):
"Daiki... where are you...?"
She sat there for a while, staring at her phone, anxiety creeping in. But eventually, she hugged her pillow tightly and whispered into it:
**Suzume** (muffled):
"...Dummy. If you're sad again... you better let me cheer you up tomorrow."
With that, she closed her eyes, unaware of the tragedy unfolding miles away.
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**Hospital – Emergency Room.**
Sirens blared as paramedics burst through the doors. Doctors shouted orders as Daiki, bloodied and unconscious, was rushed into surgery.
**Doctor:**
"BP is dropping! We're losing him—get the defibrillator!"
The doors slammed shut behind them. The hallway fell silent again... except for the quiet sobbing of a girl sitting on a bench.
**Ayaka.** Her hands trembled, clasped together in prayer, her face buried in them as tears flowed freely.
**Ayaka (shaking):**
"Please… please don't take him from me… not like this… I didn't mean to lie… I didn't mean to hurt him…"
Suddenly, hurried footsteps echoed in the corridor. She raised her head and gasped.
**Ayaka:**
"Auntie… Uncle!"
Daiki's mother collapsed to her knees, her wails piercing the hallway. His father clenched his jaw, trying to stay composed, but his eyes betrayed the agony within.
**Mother:**
"Where is my son? Where is Daiki!?"
Ayaka lunged toward her and hugged her tightly.
**Ayaka (choking through tears):**
"He… he's in surgery… I'm sorry, I'm so sorry… this is all my fault…!"
**Mother (sobbing):**
"No… no, my baby… he's still just a boy…!"
**Father (quietly, voice cracking):**
"He's strong… our boy is strong. He'll pull through… right?"
The three of them huddled together in pain, waiting... praying.
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**One Hour Later. The Operation Room Doors Open.**
A doctor stepped out, exhausted, sweat dripping down his brow. The three rushed forward instantly.
**Mother:**
"Doctor?! How is my son?! Please tell me—!"
**Doctor (softly):**
"He's... stable. We managed to stop the bleeding. He's going to make it."
Silence.
Then—
**Ayaka (covering her mouth):**
"He's alive...? He's alive!"
She burst into tears, collapsing to her knees.
Daiki's mother cried out in relief, clinging to Ayaka.
**Mother:**
"Thank you… thank you, God…"
His father stepped back, turned away slightly, and quietly wiped a tear from his cheek.
**Father (quietly):**
"Good job, Daiki… Hang in there, son."
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**Back at Suzume's Room – Dawn Approaching.**
Suzume tossed and turned. She suddenly sat up, her heart racing. Something didn't feel right.
She looked at her phone. No messages. No calls.
**Suzume (whispers):**
"...Daiki?"
She pulled her blanket over her shoulders, hugging herself, eyes wide with worry.
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**Scene: Riku's Room – Morning**
The sun crept in through the curtains, painting golden streaks across Riku's cluttered room. He sat on the floor, hugging his knees, his eyes hollow and red from a sleepless night.
_"I can't face them… not after what I did…"_ he muttered, his voice cracking.
His phone buzzed beside him, a message from a classmate:
**"Where are you? Everyone's talking…"**
Riku tossed the phone aside. _"Shut up…"_ he whispered, burying his face deeper between his arms.
**Cut Scene: School – Classroom**
The bell rang. Students filed in, chattering and laughing. Suzume sat quietly at her desk, her eyes fixed on the door.
*"He's usually here by now… walking in like a zombie with that dead stare of his,"* she thought, fidgeting with her pencil.
She waited.
And waited.
But Daiki never came.
Her heart began to race. *"Maybe… maybe he skipped first period,"* she whispered to herself. *"Maybe he's at his usual spot…"*
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**Scene: School Rooftop – Their Usual Spot**
It was finally break, and for some reason today class felt like forever. Suzume's shoes pounded against the stairs as she sprinted up.
"Daiki!" she called, pushing open the rooftop door.
The wind blew softly.
Empty.
Not even a trace of him.
Her breath hitched. She looked around frantically, as if he might be hiding behind the door, or leaning against the railing like always.
She whispered, "Where are you…"
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**Montage: Suzume Searching**
She checked the library.
The courtyard.
Even the music room where he once napped.
Nothing.
She approached one of his classmates.
"Hey, have you seen Daiki today?"
They shrugged. "No clue. Maybe he's ditching."
Another classmate added, "Riku and Ayaka aren't here either. Weird, huh?"
Suzume's worry turned into panic.
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**Scene: After School – Staff Room**
The room smelled of old books and coffee. Teachers typed on laptops or graded papers.
Suzume hesitantly approached their homeroom teacher.
"Sensei… do you know where Daiki is?"
The teacher looked up, his expression softening. "Oh… Suzume. I was told… something terrible happened. Daiki is in the hospital."
Her eyes widened.
"W-What!?" she gasped, taking a step back. "W-What happened to him?"
"He was… found unconscious. His parent said he was shot ". He's recovering, but…" he paused, seeing the color drain from her face. "I'm sorry. I should've told the class."
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**Scene: Suzume Running Home**
Tears burst from her eyes as she dashed out the school gate.
"Please… don't leave me, Daiki!" she said, her voice raw and broken.
Pedestrians turned as she ran past.
Her house came into view. She flung the door open, startling her parents.
"Suzume?" her mother called out. "What's wrong—!?"
But Suzume had already bolted upstairs.
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**Scene: Suzume's Bedroom**
She collapsed into her bed, burying her face in the pillow. The sobs came uncontrollably.
Her parents exchanged panicked glances before rushing upstairs.
Her mother entered first, her heart aching at the sight of her daughter trembling.
"Oh baby…" she whispered, gently crawling into the bed beside her, wrapping her arms around her tightly. "Shh… it's okay. Mommy's here."
Suzume clung to her mother like a lost child, crying louder.